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Kim vs Yori: Chapter 3 by *PhysicRodrigo:iconPhysicRodrigo:



Kim vs Yori or How I learned to stop worrying and Love the Destiny.

Chapter 3: Briefing.

Kim and Yori exchanged gelid glares between them. The air remained extrangely calm, like if it was expecting somehting to happen.

Yori smiled sardonically and said: -I have curiosity…. What made you come here? You thought it was just a simple challenge?  Or maybe you thought it was going to be like a mission of yours? A mission of the kind: you arrive, you skrew the villains and then you go to your home?

-It’s nothing like that… This is not a mission like all the others, this is personal…I tried to kindly convince you to leave us alone. You didn’t want to accept the fact that we are now a couple. You did obstinate yourself into something that you abandoned  years ago. I don’t understand your change of heart. But let me tell you something: I will not allow anyone or anything to ruin what I have built throughout the years with Ron.  That’s why I came here to defeat you, so you can leave us alone and at peace, once and for all.- responded a very determined Kim. .

Yori just yawned, bored.

-But I will give you the privilege of knowing the reason for what I came- continued Kim.


---------------------------------Starts another Flashback--------------------------------------.

On a small pic nic day, Kim and Ron were laying on the turf grass of the park, Kim rested her head over Ron’s tummy.She is very thoughtful and almost absent-minded. Her long and beautiful hair formed a cascade of fire all over Ron’s abdomen.  The young man is distracted too, but playing with the flippy hair of KP. Her hair is so soft and flippy that Ron can’t help but touch it and play with it. Suddenly, Ron breaks the silence in the park with a very spontaneous Booyah!

-Isn’t it fantastic?, We can be considered officialy adults-
-Yes, that’s right…- our heroine says absent minded.
both continue to wach , and Ron starting to worry about Kim asks her:

-Earth to Kim, Do you feel OK?-
-Sure, Why do you ask?-
-I know that look in your eyes, something is wrong. Come on KP.  What is it?-
Saying this, the cold image of  Yori, kissing her assaults Kim’s mind. A little panicked, Kim tries to simulate normalita and says:
-So not the drama Ron, I’m fine. Please, just… trust me-
-hmm, All right, you know that I always trust you- Ron put his dumb yet honest smile on his face.

Alter Ron said this, another dark memory comes suddenly to Kim’s mind: it is the moment when Yoru tells her tha Ron is her servant and that he will always do wahtever Kim wants him to do. The redhead tries to hide her face and  for not to shed a tear. Then she looks towards Ron and asks him, with great fear:

-Ron, Do you love me?-
Ron, confused with the question says –More than anything on the world!- Then he adds –you are my world, and I will follow you wherever you go, my young heroine-
Ron, trying to make Kim happy, compliments her (in his  Ronesque and silly way to self portrayal): -Don’t worry anymore, remember that you have the world’s best sidekick at your service-

Kim has another vision of Yori, turnig her head to glare her whit a cold glare.

Kim rose suddenly from the turf grass and said: -gotta go-
-Wait!, why? What happens?
-It’s nothing, it’s just that I remembered to do something important-
-really KP?- Ron genuinely worried- because i can go to the drug store and brought your “supplies”….-
-ROOOOON! It is not THAT! It’s still not my time of the month!- Kim blushed, but recovered composure after her informative comment- it is just an unfinished bussiness that’s all-
Ron, still confused, says: -Ok...then, I’ll see you tomorrow-
Then he stands up, and getting close to Kim, he tries to give her a goodbye-kiss, but she stops him and tells him, sadness in her voice:
-No! maybe I don’t deserve it- and after saying this, Kim runs, leaving Ron puzzled and confused. While she runs away, a big tear runs on her cheek. Kim is now determined and with resolve in her eyes she thinks:

-Ok Yori, Lets see if you are right. Soon, we will know who is more fitted and capable to make Ron happy.
©2008-2009 *PhysicRodrigo
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Author's Comments

Third chapter of the story Kim vs Yori. English version. Here we will know what made Kim go for Yori.

Kim Possible, Yori, Shego and related characters are copyright of Disney. We only used the characters for a non-profit fanfiction.

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:iconsparksman:
Just finished... Too short, as usual... ;)

And, yes, some write errors, but nothing important...

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Stale but still good: Never give up yourself! Life's way too precious...
:iconphysicrodrigo:
Thanks! :bow:

By the way, I'd like to know the errors, please, to improve my grammar.

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"If mankind does not put an end to war, war will put an end to mankind" John F. Kennedy, Democrat
:iconsparksman:
Well, honestly, as I'm not an native english speaker, I've my pain with the grammar, too. But in your case there aren't really grammar faults, but small slip of the pen like missing letters, f.e. "Kim has another vision of Yori, turnig *turning* her head to glare her whit *with* a cold glare." or "-Ok Yori, Lets *let's* see if you are right.".

Ok, ok, I know, this sounds bumptious, but I correct for another fanfic writer too, but only in german, and as I like to read since first grade of school (and I read a lot since then), I'm slightly worried because of write errors. Sorry... :shrug:

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Stale but still good: Never give up yourself! Life's way too precious...
:iconphysicrodrigo:
Spitze! Danke.

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"If mankind does not put an end to war, war will put an end to mankind" John F. Kennedy, Democrat
:iconsparksman:
:D

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Stale but still good: Never give up yourself! Life's way too precious...

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